Monday, September 21, 2015

Chapter 14- episode 8

              HAMERTON

Hallow new readers!
This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.

She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.


Previously on Hamerton; Natalie arrives Hamerton and confronts Steven for what he did to Trevor. She threatens to tell on him and he is willing to cooperate. He receives a phone call and the girls are anxious for him to receive it.

Continue;

“Hallow?” Stephen called to his cellphone after receiving it.
“Hallow Steven. How are things?” it was his uncle.
Stephen glanced at the girls who still glared at him with readiness to tear him apart. He swallowed. “Uncle? How is he?”
“I give him a few hours.”
Steven was shocked. “That? Why?”
“His condition is unstable. He just had a violent seizure a few minutes ago. Do you have his medical background?”
Steven drew a deep sigh. He turned away just to keep Ingrid from hearing that. They were discussing Trevor’s fate. Her Trevor. And she knew just how sick he could get.
“Yes amh… He, he suffered a relapse from,” he sighed again. “Cohrein. If you've heard about it.”
Ingrid gasped behind him. They are talking about Trevor? My Trevor? She thought. That was so heartbreaking.
“Oh yes I've heard.” Uncle replied over the phone. “Let me guess. You want to kill this person.”
He tried once but, it was not the case now. Steven turned back to Natalie and Ingrid. “No.” he said.
“Well, he is going to die if he doesn't wake up, soon.” Uncle said.
“What do you recommend?” Steven asked. “Medically that is...”
“The remedy could be quite simple. Smell of a favorite food or hearing a favorite song. He’s on life support now so, think of something.”
Steven nodded. “I’ll get back to you shortly.”
“Wait, doesn't he have a girlfriend?”
Steven made the calculations of all the important women in Trevor’s life that he was aware of. “I’ll get to you.” Steven said looking at Natalie. He did not want to make her jealous.
With that, he hang up and lowered the phone.
“It’s about Trevor isn't it?” Natalie asked.
“You kidnapped him?” Ingrid shouted.
“Yes he did.” Natalie answered for him. “You will take us to where he is.”
“Wait.” Steven said. “There is a problem.”
“He’s not dead or is he?” Ingrid asked in panic.
“Whatever you have to tell us you have to do it now!” Natalie bawled.
Steven drew in a breath first. “May I talk to Ingrid? Alone please?”
Natalie frowned. “You can’t have that opportunity.”
“That’s right, I don’t trust you Steven. Tell me in front of her, what is wrong with my cousin.” Ingrid demanded.
“Ingrid, please? Natalie, you can work our way out of here. I want to explain to Ingrid everything. She is my girlfriend, she deserves it.”
Natalie fumed at him.
Ingrid was a bit lost. Maybe he was right.
“Please?” Steven asked.
Ingrid gave one pleading glance at Natalie and she sighed.

“Just don’t,” Natalie begun, pointing a finger at him. “Don’t kidnap her.” She said and walked out.

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Chapter 14- episode 7

              HAMERTON

Hallow new readers!
This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.
She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.


Continue;

Previously on Hamerton;
About a month back.
“Ashleigh was my friend.” Natalie begun vainly wiping tears that fell from her eyes.
“I know.” The officer replied oddly.
Natalie sighed. “It is true that, I agreed to play the games in the house but, it was totally Ashleigh and Lucie’s idea.”
“Natalie, you don’t have to add.”
Natalie furrowed her eyebrows at this. She was struck by the fact that the officer was actually supporting her.
Was it some kind of patriotism?
“I don’t understand?” she confessed holding a queer look at him.
The officer offered a grin. “Well, Miss Bradley, I am Corny Howl, Trevor Tommy sent me to take care of you.”
“What?” she asked. She was lost between how and why.
“Once Trevor discovered that you were paired with Miss Moure, he placed a contact, just in case. And as he suspected, Miss Moure tried to pull one on you. She must have tried to kill you but, accidentally murdered Miss Smith.”
She gasped, absorbing the few facts. They were too many revelations to handle. “So, you’re not a cop?”
“Am and a bodyguard.” He said and paused to read her expression. She seemed to hardly understand. He went on, “But, that’s not important. What is, is that, Miss Moure has all the power to implicate you in Ashleigh’s murder.”
“But, I didn't do it!” she snapped.
“No, you didn't. I can relay whatever I have got to the Berlin police department and Interpol and from the way Miss Moure is, she will easily give herself up.” He folded his face. “She has a lot of anger. She has no self-control.”
Natalie swallowed and said. “I just don’t believe how she could be capable of taking someone’s life so cruelly.”
The ‘cop’ shuffled his documents together. “You will be surprised of what people can do once you take on Hamerton’s case.”
“You know about Hamerton?”
“Yes. I know everything involving Trevor Tommy.”
She paused for a few seconds and asked. “How is he?”
“Mr. Tommy?”
“Yes.” She agreed smiling to herself. She missed him. He was her hero.
“He is fine, fine.” Corny replied nodding. “He must be with Ingrid because he has left Los Angeles.”
“Yeah. They are together now.”
“Okay. So, Miss Bradley, you are free to go. You can leave the country.” He said, urging her out.
She rose. “Thank you.”
He smiled a little and she left.


 Present day
Corny Howl sat again across an interrogation desk with one of the Hamerton students. He was heading the investigation of Erin and Michael Morningstar’s murder for the Interpol after he successfully solved the case in Berlin. He was also there as Trevor’s most trusted ally but, only in that case, he was not commissioned. Trevor himself was missing.
“When did you last see Trevor Tommy?” was his first question to every student in the office that the school gave him. He was desperate to find Trevor first.
The chubby Tobias swallowed. “On Saturday at the Interview.”
“They all say that…” Corny murmured under breath. “Okay. How are you related to Erin Shawn or Michael Morningstar?”
“Well, not so much. I have never engaged socially with either of them. Except, Erin was part of the interviewers in one that I took part.”
“Alright. Where were you the day that the murder took place?”
“Today?”
“Yes.”
“Oh… I was in my class.”
“Michael Morningstar was beaten. Do you know anything about that?” he asked and looked down at a file on his desk. “It says here that you are one of the Presidential candidates,” he raised his glance to him, “and you run against Michael Morningstar.”
“I know but, I didn't do it.”
“Do what?”
“Beat Michael Morningstar.”
Corny raised an inquisitive eyebrow. “Do you know who did?”
“I don’t know… Trevor?”
Corny leaned forward. “Why do you think that Trevor did it?”
Tobias shrugged. “I don’t know… they all say that.”
“Why?”
“I guess Michael said that before he died.”
“Or, they killed him to keep him from talking.” Corny helped.
Tobias was silent.
“You did it.”
Tobias widened his eyes. “I did not!”
“He was your only competition.”
“I didn't kill him.” Tobias cried. “I don’t even know how to do anything right. How can I take someone’s life?”
That was new.
Corny shuffled his papers. “Alright. You can leave this office.” He said. He already concluded that Tobias did not harm anyone.
Tobias rose and begun confessing before Corny looked at him. “On Sunday… Michael was meeting someone in the chief building’s balcony.”
 Corny narrowed his eyes. “Who?”
“I don’t know.” Tobias said. “But, I guess that it was a girl from the way Michael had dressed and sprayed himself.”
Corny took a few seconds digesting the new information. “That was before he got beaten.” He reckoned.
“Most likely.”
“How do you know what Michael was up to, Tobias?”
“Well, I did make a little follow up.” He paused to add with more embarrassment. “I also tracked his cell.”
Corny drew back, grimacing. “You were stalking your opponent? What kind of election rules does your school have?”
“A few.” Tobias replied without a thought.
“No wonder he was killed.” Corny thought aloud.
“That’s all I know.”
Corny nodded and Tobias left.
The office door opened and his assistant officer, Millies walked in.
“Let in another student Millies, please?” Corny asked.
“Before that. The officers searched Michael’s room and his stash. Well, there’s nothing to link him to any threat that could have killed him.”
“Have you checked his phone?”
Millies folded her Irish face. “No. There was no phone anywhere.”
Corny’s eyes flashed. “The boy who just left said that Michael had a cell phone.”
“Well, it wasn't on him when the ambulance took him to the mortuary.”
Corny glanced around the room. “So, where could it be?” he asked more to himself than to Millies. He got a thought. “Millies. Call that boy again. He can help us track Michael’s phone. That might be our first evidence to Michael’s murder and Erin’s.”
“Yes officer.” She said and left.

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Sunday, September 20, 2015

Chapter 14- episode 6

              HAMERTON

Hallow new readers!
This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.
She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.

Previously; Natalie arrives Hamerton and is received by Carlito and Samantha who inform her about Trevor's missing and Michael Morningstar's hurt. she is puzzled by everything and sets out to find Ingrid.

Continue;

When Ingrid heard of Erin’s murder, she was shuttered. She isolated herself in the staircase to sob about what happened. First, Trevor was missing and then, Erin was suddenly killed. Maybe they had already lost the battle. The seniors were too powerful for them.
She pulled her legs close to her chest, burying her head between them. She recalled all the times which she and Erin spent together. Erin was the first person to receive her when Ingrid arrived Hamerton from Brooklyn. They shared many secrets together.
Loosing Erin was just a big blow to bear for Ingrid and even more, Trevor who was her everything. How could he have left? Just like that? He did not even tell her.
She burst into more tears thinking about Trevor. She hardly noticed when a person arrived and sat next to her on the stair step. She only felt an arm around her back and continued crying, uncaring of whoever it was.
“Oh Ingrid.” It was Steven.
He tried to make her lean toward him but, she raised her head, drawing back and stared at him with her wet face. “How could you do it, Steve? How could you turn your back on Trevor? You know that he did not harm Michael Morningstar but, how could you tell everyone that he did?”
Steven gulped at her reproachful words. They made him feel slightly guilty. He sighed first, trying to find words to defend himself. “Ingrid. I know how much you are attached to Trevor. But, I never told on him what he did. People have only been talking about what Morningstar confessed to Archibald before,” he paused to add sentimentally “he was brutally killed in the hospital together with Erin.”
Ingrid folded her face, releasing a surge of tears. “Where is Trevor? Where is Trevor my God!” she cried.
Steven pulled her in his arms and gave her a strong embrace. She cried loudly on his back, calling Trevor’s name. That did make him a bit jealous but, he coaxed her nonetheless.  
As they lasted that way for half a minute, a call interrupted them.
Natalie made her entry in the hallway, some feet from them and some steps below.
“Ingrid!” she called again and scurried to their site, crying.
Steven and Ingrid parted, glancing at Natalie, Ingrid rose and ran after her as well.
They fell into each other, crying.
“She’s gone Natalie… Him and her are gone.” Ingrid sobbed.
“I don’t understand… how could it happen? Why?” Natalie asked in tears.
“They killed her. They killed her.” Ingrid repeated in pain.
Catching sight of Steven at the stairs, Natalie frowned. She released herself from Ingrid’s clutch and started toward him.
He had risen and was standing at the stair landing. He greeted her with a fearful grin.
“Natalie.” The name escaped his mouth before she dropped a heavy slap on his face.
“Where is he?” she growled, glaring at him.
“Natalie!” Ingrid called behind her with shock.
Steven gasped, staring at Natalie with a terrorized look.
“Where is he?” she shouted. Her face became red with anger and even her blood veins were showing. “Tell me where he is, Steven or I swear I will tell everyone here who you really are.”
“Natalie?” Ingrid called again trying to pull her back.
Natalie jerked her hand free, focusing on Steven.
Steven’s cell rang immediately in his pocket and for seconds the ringing became the only sound in that side of the hallway.
Steven swallowed. “Okay.” He said. “I’ll tell you where he is.”
“What!” Ingrid exclaimed. She looked at him with disbelief. “What’s going on here?”
Steven glanced at Ingrid then back at Natalie with his face showing upset. “I can take you to where he is but, I don’t expect that we will be allowed to leave. After Erin and Michael Morningstar’s murder, everyone is a suspect.”
Natalie opened her mouth to add but, Stephen’s phone which had also stopped ringing, started all over again.
“Pick it up and don’t not go anywhere.” Natalie commanded instead.
He eyed her awfully once and then slid his hand in his trouser pocket to take his call.

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Saturday, September 19, 2015

Chapter 14- episode 5

              HAMERTON

Hallow new readers!
This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.
She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.

Previously on Hamerton; Fred and Cheryl appear at the school hospital as agreed to interview Michael Morningstar. But, they, along with the medical practitioners of the hospital, discover Erin and Michael's murdered bodies in Michael's ward. 

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Natalie arrived Hamerton at around 2pm when there was already a commotion because of the incident that happened. She was struck by a bunch of police cars that packed in front of the chief building and many of the students forming groups, chattering about some things.
She was lucky to get the attention of two juniors who came to receive her and helped her with her bags from the main gate to the way leading to the girls’ dorm.
“What’s going on?” she asked them as they crossed the school compound.
“Well Miss Natalie, Michael Morningstar was beaten up and they say that Trevor did it.” Samantha, one of the juniors replied.
“Trevor did not hit Michael.” Carlito, the other junior objected in defense. “I already told you. I saw Trevor myself. He was sick and we carried him to the leaders’ quarters.”
Natalie furrowed her eyebrows. “Wait, wait… Trevor was sick?” she asked.
“Yes.” Carlito replied nodding. “On Saturday after the interview in the school theater.”
“Oh my God!” Natalie exclaimed. “And what happened to him? Where did you take him?”
“The leaders’ quarters. But, he has gone missing until now and that’s why people are saying that he beat up Michael Morningstar.” Carlito said.
Now Natalie was more confused. “But, the leaders’ quarters is off bounds.”
“Maybe not because, Trevor Tommy is the former President.” Samantha explained proudly.
“That’s where Steven had us take Trevor.” Carlito said to Natalie, neglecting Samantha’s comment.
“Did he tell you why there and not the hospital, Carlito?” Natalie asked.
“No Miss Natalie.” Carlito replied.
“Where is Trevor now?” Natalie asked.
“No one knows.” Samantha replied.
Natalie sighed. That was what Erin warned her about. She glanced at the chief building and seeing the police vehicles, she inquired, “Why all those police cars? Are they looking for Trevor?”
Carlito shrugged.
“Some say that they were gunshots in the school hospital. Carlito, didn't you see the ambulance car arrive at around one?” Sam replied and asked.
“Really?” Natalie asked already alarmed.
“Yeah.” Sam said.
“I never saw that.” Carlito said shrugging. “But, that does explain why everyone is nattering about something.”

They had reached a pavement way to the girl’s dorm and Carlito had to leave them. Natalie requested Samantha to take her bags to her room while she went to look for Ingrid or Erin. Samantha agreed and they parted.


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Friday, September 18, 2015

What you may have missed in Hamerton

Hallow friends and viewers.
If you have been following our story from the start; the summary has changed from;

 Natalie joins Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with the Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre. She teams up with Trevor, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton and Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.


to the following in Chapter 14;

This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.
She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.


Consider the words standing out in the summaries. 'friend'
In the first case, Caitlin was supposedly murdered. But, as the story went on, we realized that Mr. Tommy (Trevor's dad) confessed to have met Caitlin with her brother and they are living with their father in Canada! So, in this case, Natalie was agonized by the news of Caitlin's tragic death. 
As for the second case, the 'friend' stands for Erin. So, here Natalie is agonized by the news of Erin's tragic death.
As we have seen in the preceded episode of Hamerton, Erin, together with Michael Morningstar were murdered in his hospital ward.  

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Chapter 14- episode 4

              HAMERTON

Hallow new readers!
This is a story about Hamerton, a large school that has a lot of things going on, most of them being illegal and terrorizing. Natalie Bradley, an intelligent and talented girl from Brooklyn joins this school after her friend Caitlin who was allegedly murdered in Hamerton. She is agonized by the news of her friend's tragic death and she has to face up with Hamerton's bloody governance in order to secure the President's badge that has the power to decode a bomb that could cause a large massacre, soon.
She teams up with Trevor Tommy, the ex and most renowned president of Hamerton, Ingrid, and other Class D students against Nicky and her fellow evil seniors.

Previously on Hamerton; Erin hears Michael's version of his story. It happens that, It was Duane Duncan who hit him and according to Duane, at Trevor's instructions. Erin tries to convince Michael that Trevor could not have possibly hire Duane to hurt him but, Michael Morningstar is reluctant to cooperate. 
She threatens him with a gun and a bullet is released. 

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The gun shots in Michael’s ward caught the attention of all of the patients in the school hospital.
“Oh my God what was that?” Two nurses at the reception asked each other.
At the entrance, Fred and Cheryl arrived with their camera and microphone.
“Good day nurse Abby, nurse May.” Fred greeted first. “We are here to interview a patient, Michael Morningstar. Can we see him please?”
The nurses had disturbed faces because of the shot. Before any of them could reply, their boss; Dr. Gamaliel came from his office and asked. “Did anyone else hear that?”
“I think it was a shot.” Nurse Abby said.
“I also heard something just before we stepped foot in here.” Cheryl contributed.
“So, where did it come from?” the doctor asked.
There was a cry from one of the wards and the nurses and doctor rushed out toward the direction of it.
Fred and Cheryl followed.
Just in case, Fred had his camera rolling.
As the five approached the corridor leading into the wards, they heard more cries. The patients were altogether frightened by the sound of gunshots and begun to cry.
The five entered the ward of one junior at a single door to Michael’s open ward. The girl was the one who made the cry.
Nurse Abby walked to her to console her.
“It’s okay. Hush.” Nurse Abby coaxed.
“It’s alright Felicia.” The doctor promised. “Calm down. Did the shots wake you?”
Felicia nodded.
“So, where did they come from?” Fred asked lowering his camera.
Cheryl’s eyes flashed recalling the opened ward she glimpsed at, next to this girl’s room. “Who’s sleeping next door?”
The nurses and doctor turned to her.
“Michael Morningstar. Why?” Nurse May replied and asked.
Without response, Cheryl scurried out of the room to the ward adjacent to Felicia’s.
The other’s followed in queer and came to pause right where she halted, at the threshold of Michael’s ward.
Cheryl had frozen with her mouth dropped open and eyes widened, beholding the gruesome sight of Erin’s body, lying against Michael’s, with bloody bullet holes on both their heads.
“Jesus.” Fred whispered, rolling.


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